Thursday, May 18, 2017

Dog With Dreams

The dog had a dream to fly
But he didn't want to die
He jumped the roof and said "bye, bye"
And he somehow made it to the sky?

8 comments:

  1. I love the way this is thought through, the way your poem flows is really flowy.

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  2. Sounds a lot like Shel Silverstern, keep it up!

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  3. Flowers really well loved to read it.

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  4. Whoa, I love the way you described this! Awesome job!

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  5. This is so simple yet great!

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  6. This is an amazing poam. Like wow! So good

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  7. That is very cool story/poem you have here.

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  8. cute and unrealistic

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