Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Graveyard

Why? Why are there 100 plus stones in one place? Well, because it is a graveyard of course. I was at the graveyard on Friday night. The owls were loud and I was scared. All of a sudden I felt sleepy and fell down and hit my head hard on the road. The thick blood poured out. When I woke up, I saw the light. Light of my mom's car that was picking me up and taking me home safely.
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  1. AnonymousMay 17, 2017 at 7:49 AM

    i really liked this story and all the detail it had

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  2. AnonymousMay 17, 2017 at 7:53 AM

    I like the adjectives you use to describe the graveyard and the things in it. I was one in a situation like this, accept my head wasn't busted and my mom was with me. Nice work!

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  3. AnonymousMay 17, 2017 at 9:25 AM

    I like how you can make the story so short and still have a lot of detail! 👍🏼👌🏼

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  4. AnonymousMay 18, 2017 at 10:55 AM

    Now me being into creepy stuff like grave yards, im really entriuged by this peice. I really like this, keep up the good work.

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