Flowing through my hair, the wind, stroking my brunette locks, brushed it in gentle ruffles.
The wide open fields finished with a green polish that made the color glow.
In front of me, rising for miles, two huge mountains.
I sat and gazed at their serene beauty for a minute or two.
The blooming trees were all different colors: red, pink, green, and yellow.
The lilies perfumed the air with a pleasant aroma.
Lying down, I looked up at the sky only to find shades of blue, purple, and orange.
As the time passed, the moon illuminated the sky along with the sparkling stars.
I started to walk back, but first I turned to silently say goodbye,
and it was as if the wind waved its farewell back.
~ Lisa Gutierrez
"The lilies perfumed the air with a pleasant aroma" What a great sentence I've never thought about using the word perfumed in my writing before.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely little poem. The word choice is amazing.
ReplyDeleteYou described everything so well! I love this post! Amazing Job!
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