a few favorites from Ms. Spengler's language arts classes of 2016-2017
Wednesday, May 17, 2017
Beach Daze
I remember... the sand between our toes the sun in our eyes the wind in our hair the waves crashing the water splashing the sun set the day gone Then came... the goodbye the tears shed the empty feeling until next time
Week I'm coming with you next time to go! O it's ok if you can't save me a spot on the plain! I'll just sit in your suit case, and you can wear everything that you take with you! Ok?
This post was always so beautiful. I really admire your writing skills. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThis I amazing. I really love the list format and have always wanted to try it.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you wrote this!
ReplyDeleteI love the was this was written. I also love that is was short and sweet. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI like the word choice. Paints a pretty picture in my head, good job.
ReplyDeleteThe format really helped form the mood of the poem.
ReplyDeleteI love this. Especially because its like a promotion speech and perfectly explains 8th grade. Just without the sand and beachy feel
ReplyDeleteWeek I'm coming with you next time to go! O it's ok if you can't save me a spot on the plain! I'll just sit in your suit case, and you can wear everything that you take with you! Ok?
ReplyDeleteThis is how I feel every time after going on vacation! And you just put it into words! Amazing Job!!
ReplyDeleteI love the beach too. That was a great poem.
ReplyDeletei like how it flows with reason
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