Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Snow

Pretty flowers, growing to bloom
Tree roots, grabbing the ground
Selfish grass, stealing water
Humming birds, hitting windows
                               flowers wilting
                                                                            trees falling
                                              grass pulled
                    water seeping
                                                  birds falling
                               Mother coughing
                                                                                     bugs devoured 
                                                             disease spreading 
                                                                                                     hospitals full
                                                money evaporating 
                                                                                          banks empty
                                                                                                                       world revolting
                                                                                                       want to get in
                                                                               wait list high
                                                                                                              survival low

Everything's dead
                    as quick as snow.

10 comments:

  1. Wow! This is so cool I like how the words are placed on the blog! 👏👏😄

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  2. My god! Snow is supposed to be happy! Great piece of writing!

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  3. I love how you used personification. ( I think that's what it's called) This poem lit up my face. Incredible job.

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  4. OMG I'm in awe. I really love the format and your end line.

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  5. I love the way you laid this out! But it did make it a little hard to follow.

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  6. Though these concepts are dreary and seemingly random, I feel like there's a deeper story hidden within this amazingly formatted poem. When the world ends it will be covered in snow.

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  7. Ahhhhhhghighhhhaaa!! That's so depressing. I love it.

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  8. It's too real. I loved the layout of this poem. It reminds me of nuclear winter.

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  9. Wow. I really like this. I love how it slowly escalates and is really deep. But the sad thing i that it could actually happen. But who knows. What can you do. Still, great job.

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  10. this story is depresing and i love it you should make more.

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