Thursday, May 18, 2017

Dog With Dreams

The dog had a dream to fly
But he didn't want to die
He jumped the roof and said "bye, bye"
And he somehow made it to the sky?
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 18, 2017 at 10:57 AM

    I love the way this is thought through, the way your poem flows is really flowy.

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  2. Grace MarieMay 18, 2017 at 12:41 PM

    Sounds a lot like Shel Silverstern, keep it up!

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  3. AnonymousMay 18, 2017 at 1:08 PM

    Flowers really well loved to read it.

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  4. AnonymousMay 18, 2017 at 1:17 PM

    Whoa, I love the way you described this! Awesome job!

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  5. AnonymousMay 18, 2017 at 1:50 PM

    This is so simple yet great!

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  6. AnonymousMay 18, 2017 at 8:07 PM

    This is an amazing poam. Like wow! So good

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  7. AnonymousMay 19, 2017 at 9:13 AM

    That is very cool story/poem you have here.

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  8. AnonymousMay 19, 2017 at 9:42 AM

    cute and unrealistic

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