Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Pessimist

They had little courage
That faded in the darkness 
They fused it with discourage 
And just a bit of tartness
They added loss and vengeance 
Then with a sudden prejudice 
They forced it all together 
And made a pessimist



3 comments:

  1. The rhyming was neat.

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  2. Wow i love this. It is really cool and simple. I love that even though I don't know some words in there, lol, its still makes its self know and gives a meaning. Great job

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  3. i love how you used the title at the very end, it gives it a feeling that i dont know how to explain it! Its a very great poem.

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