your parents pick you up when you fall
your siblings protect you from awful guys but,
your teachers give you something special. A pen.
A pen can show you that you can't get rid of your mistakes and
that you can't always right your wrongs.
For some a pen is a pen.
but for others a pen can not only open
a new door to the world but can clarify the reality of it all.
This is a really nice poem, especially since Mrs.Spengler gave us a pen the other day.
ReplyDeleteThis is very inspiring. I love it. It's very truthful.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this poem and it made me very emotional oboist the end of the year. My favorite part was the part about the pen.
ReplyDeleteThis was really beautiful. I could really tell how sincere you are.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you described the pen, I also like the way you had examples before you introduced the teacher and pen! Awesome Job!
ReplyDeleteso cute sounds like you now this person well
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